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Well done Hoani,I enjoyed reading your writing!You made it sound very exciting just remember to re read and check for punctuation.
You really like your cars Hoani. Go through the story again and have a look at where you could add full stops and capital letters to help with the flow of the way it is read.
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Well done Hoani,I enjoyed reading your writing!You made it sound very exciting just remember to re read and check for punctuation.
ReplyDeleteYou really like your cars Hoani. Go through the story again and have a look at where you could add full stops and capital letters to help with the flow of the way it is read.
ReplyDeleteok thank you
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