Thursday 23 April 2020

this is my digital writing . I did it in about seven minutes. It was pretty easy just keep going till your finished.

2 comments:

  1. Cool idea for your story Hoani, I think you could add to it to explain what happened to the man when the aliens surrounded him. Also make sure you're checking the spelling of your words like 'The'.

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  2. I good idea for a story Hoani,I would have liked to know what happens next? good effort!

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