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Cool idea for your story Hoani, I think you could add to it to explain what happened to the man when the aliens surrounded him. Also make sure you're checking the spelling of your words like 'The'.
I good idea for a story Hoani,I would have liked to know what happens next? good effort!
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Cool idea for your story Hoani, I think you could add to it to explain what happened to the man when the aliens surrounded him. Also make sure you're checking the spelling of your words like 'The'.
ReplyDeleteI good idea for a story Hoani,I would have liked to know what happens next? good effort!
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